Really good lyrics and delivery.
Your lyrics go incredibly well with the overall mood of the song. Plus your delivery is really good as well which compliments the lyrics a lot. Because if you had good lyrics but bad delivery you wouldn't sound very good. I really like this and I can't think of any way you could possibly improve. I just want to hear more from you. So I hope you make more songs in the near future and I'll be sure to look you up.