Nice first one.

It does sound a bit slow. The tempo does need to be faster because this seems like a fast pacing song. Your beat combinations are not the best, but your getting close to it. The patterns of your song is probably the best part of it.
The pattern is great, but it does sound a little random.
I can tell this can have a lot more work put into it.
Oh by the way, what program did you use to make this, because I'm still looking for a free program to create music myself.