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Undone

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Redid an old-ish song. I think this version is MUCH better. See what ya think ;)


Here's the version with vocals for those interested: Undone - Vocals


Edit: Holy crap! Another front page?! Thank you so much!


Lyrics:


Undone


At last, the fire

Rains from the sky

Burns the land

It ignites


What once was

Now undone

As the prophecy foretold

Shamed by our sins


The end unfolds


I’ve watched it all

Crumble down

A thousand times,

Before now!

 

The fate you see

Is the image that’s

Burned in my head

 

Like a fractured dream

I cannot wake

Stuck on repeat

Bound by fate

 

I’ve seen this world

As it ends

And it’s out of our hands

 

A land of ash; all that remains

Darkened, broken sky

Hollowed homes

No hope left alive


All we know

The ones we loved

They fade unto dust

It’s the fate that awaits us…


I’ve watched it all

Crumble down

A thousand times,

Before now!

 

The fate you see

Is the image that’s

Burned in my head

 

Like a fractured dream

I cannot wake

Stuck on repeat

Bound by fate

 

I’ve seen this world

As it ends

And it’s out of our hands

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Love it!

bipolarmunkey responds:

Thank you so much!

Yesssss the front page where you belong!

bipolarmunkey responds:

Haha, thanks man! it's so surreal having 2 back to back submissions being Front Paged. It's a humbling feeling. Thanks so much for your kind words! Looking forward to your next work as well!

I really like this! I loved the way you eased into the song and I think you nailed the transition from a low energy part to a high one. It passes off such a nice feeling as well! I don't have much else to say about this because I think this was done super well so 5/5 for me. Please post the one with the lyrics! Also sorry it took me like 10 years to review this.

bipolarmunkey responds:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

There is plenty of heavy in this heavy metal. Good use of guitar work, it really comes through very well. If you are going to redo a song, you have to improve upon it. This redo, did its job. I really enjoy this newer version.

bipolarmunkey responds:

Thank you so much for listening man! I definitely try to revisit some of my favorite songs every now and again as I notice myself improving over the years. I'm really happy with this one. but I have another song coming down the pike that I've been working and reworking for YEARS now. I'm actually really excited for this next one!

Love the lead guitar over the reverbed cleaner guitar. It's quite melancholic but then the rhythm guitar comes in and I feel like I'm back in 1991. I really like the "alt-rock" sound. I'll have to check out the version with vocals. Nice chorus riff. Actually I started playing guitar last night with a friend and this is giving me more incentive to get back into it. You're style and my style of rhythm are kinda similar. I like this a lot! please post the one with vocals! 5/5
-Glenn

bipolarmunkey responds:

Thanks alot man! i really wanted something dark and ominous but with a heavy overtone while maintaining an 'old-school vibe. The lyrics really impact the song alot so i'll probably record some vocals on it soon. I'll PM ya when it's out! And hell yea man! If you ever want to try and collab on something, I'd be down! Just hmu!

Credits & Info


Listens
4,318
Faves:
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Downloads
97
Votes
25
Score
4.86 / 5.00

Uploaded
Aug 29, 2021
5:39 PM EDT
Genre
Heavy Metal
File Info
Song
6.3 MB
4 min 34 sec
Software
  • FL Studio
  • Serum
Misc. Kit
  • Get Good Drums
  • vital
  • Line 6 Pod Go

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.