It's alright
I think the first version is better than the second, there was more stuff going on in the first, and in this version there wasn't much going on altogether, I agree with americanidiot2f, it needs more combination.
Re-recording/Remake of my song Teenage
It's alright
I think the first version is better than the second, there was more stuff going on in the first, and in this version there wasn't much going on altogether, I agree with americanidiot2f, it needs more combination.
More combining
The song was generally so-so, but you should combine more instruments together.
I know that I have to use more instruments in my songs. But it´s not that easy though..
But I can always add a instrument sometime.
Thanks for the review and giving advice.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.