i see that you followed your piano string method in your future pieces and they have improved...not that this is any less creative but its a start to what you have done here..
The electric guitar at 1:10 worked in favour of the feel but while in the background i noticed some slight hissing to the piano...could have been my speakers but still...
The Pan flute at 3:00 works brilliantly(or at least its a similar instrument)
Again i hear a melancholy undertone without the beauty of the last but a tension of sorts, similar to standing at the edge of a canyon looking down and feeling the hot currents buffet your face and the smell of warm earth tickling your senses....
alright i believe that when someone creates a song,piece whatever they are trying to express some feeling or idea much as in artistry and its important to see what others feel and think off when they listen to your work...
untill next time
I love the addition of the strings to the piano, and the guitar's introduction is masterful. This reminds of a short piano piece I wrote in high school. Anyway. The feel is amazing, and it really gets the mood I think you wanted across. The title is brilliant.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.