This is wonderful, awesome, and if I listed all that I thought of it, the four thousand character thing on this thing wouldn't be enough. This song has such a message, and it's something that I think a lot of people can relate to... And, as some people have said before, listening to your music, I also think that you should make an album. Cause this is undescribably awesome.
Make it longer!
I loves it!! =D
Things to make it longer-
and you have a perfect song =]
wow is to less for this!
keep it up!
I like your different vocal styles this is great
especially like the piano and the lines;
"you are living my life for me, that's great. until you fuck up."
the simpleness of the song and the message go well together.
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