You are right ChroniMC
I love electronic music and this song was very cool ;-)
Hmm....It's just going on and on. ^^;
I'm sorry, but I have to agree with Zaki because the whole song is repeating over and over with some extra purcussions barging in and few notes on the background going on. The thing that tells you when you're successful with your song is that they can remember your song in their head with one or two loops of your song. :D Try adding some peaks to your songs so listeners can enjoy the song as the music flows.
Great try on this though. :)
Personally I'm not into the whole trance thing so I'm not one to really judge but from what experience I have about production music:
Seems like the whole song sounded the same, didn't really have a pickup until about 1:40 and even then it was pretty much the same. Try harder to have different segments in the song and make people go "wow, that part kicked ass."
This goes to both of you, I really do hate people that judge a genre they dislike.
It's electronica for gods sake. Its supposed to be the same until 1:40 its called BUILD UP.
I am just going to stop posting music on NG because its useless it seems most of the people here revolve around hard metal, rock, hip hop or misc genres, its pathetic.
Both of you are pathetic, and thats just plain honesty. Do me one favor, please for future posters of techno, house, or trance - just dont vote... its not your thing, leave it for those who's it is. Neither of your reviews were helpful. There aren't supposed to be many peaks, there is supposed to be the same sound for quite some time before it changes in any technophobic genre. Wow.