I really liked how this turned out. It's probably my favorite song that I've ever made.
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Edit (03/25/08): This is the third version of this song that I've posted now. I'm trying really hard to get the vocals perfect (which is hard, because I'm a pretty lousy singer), so I hope everyone enjoys this.
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was really cool, i loved the melody with precussion
sounds almost a bit TV on the radio, ever heard em?
i think maybe a little bit stronger vocals, and then get multiple pitches, for some harmony, and you my friend, will have one of my favorite songs.
i really liked this, good job
I love TV On The Radio, thanks for the comparison, it's very flattering.
I just got a better mic, and I intend on going back to this song and re-doing the vocals. I thought about doing harmonies when I recorded this song, but I had a bit of a cold, and just wanted to get a rough cut down. I've really just been procrastinating.
Anyway, thanks for the review, I appreciate your advice. (Also, if you haven't heard it already, I recommend TV on the Radio's 'OK Calculator'. It's a little hard to track down, as they never released it, but it's pretty damn awesome).
cool
I liked it , but i think you need to try a bit better on the vocals they sounded wavery most of the time but i think it has really great potential
Thank you. I agree. The criticism I get the most is pertaining to the quality of my vocals and the lack of strength behind them. I am probably going to re-do the vocals on this track and then re-post it. I appreciate your response.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
ericdrebin 
