The mike squeaked at about 1:12 or so, but other than that, yeah, it just needs a catch-phrase as jnry3 says, but i think it just needs the volume of the singer turned up so its a bit more audible
Sounds good, but...
...if this is to break out into mainstream radio, it needs a catch phrase... something catchy to keep it in people's heads even after listening to it once or twice. That's the only thing missing in here.
Technically, it's a pro work, so no probs here.
Overall sound is good, but common. Yes, it can blend in the airwaves, but it might not rise to the surface.
Hope this helps Southcott. More power to you! ^_^
I think SOuthcott wouldn't use this one to get on the Radio, but I shall tell Southcott about the catch-phrase thing.
Maybe common, but most common bands (Fall Out Boy, MCR etc...) get somewhere hehe.
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