wasn't that good
I wouldn't say it should be louder, but it needs more beats, more instruments.
The guitar needed a repeating pattern to it, but I understand that you didn't spend much time on it.
Can be better
Here's what I think:
- The jam wasn't bad, but it didn't feel exciting either.
- I didn't hear a bass element aside from the bass drum. If you do not intend to put a bass guitar or bass strings, you should increase the volume of your bass drum. Gives more impact that way, and a more whole and heavy sound.
- As stated in point #2, the track needs more weight (add bass in EQ).
Hope this helps! ^_^
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