Good

Like Onision said, it's a little bit out of sync. If you don't know what we mea, in the beginning, the cellos all start at slightly different times, and it starts to get annoying. But it straightens out at the end when the higher notes come in. It was a pretty good song, but too mellow for how long it is. Maybe if this were a loop to add in the background for a game or something that would make sense but for a song this long maybe some drums at least. Thanks for reading.

The sounds were off...

It didn't sound very sync at all... the instruments were very nice, but the overall quality of collaboration was quite off.

Enjoyed

I agree, even though there are millions of songs alike in this world everyone has a way of feeling this way. It's human nature. But the ending is a wonderful cutoff. A bit longer thought of having it done would be perfect. Like a bit of a longer fade out.
Whover you are you are doing a fantastic job on doing your music and you must keep your head up. Don't ever let critics and music fanatics ever bring you down, let your heart bleed through the souls of the human spirit and breath a little life of color into your own as well, Move forward with a high knowledge knowing that you created a peice that surges on, i will continue listening to your other peices. That is a promise. Thanks.

Garageband?

One question... did you use garageband to make this? Because it sounds like my song, creation and its purpose... well, this will probably get front page. it is brilliant with no errors what so ever. Very nice work with this one! Oh... one thing I just noticed. You need a better ending. It ended kind of non-warning if you know what I mean. =)