I am going to be nice here
Since this is your first time using FL I will go easy on this review. Your right about the rhythm cause everyone knows that pattern. My tip to you is to get rid of the oscillator. Your first time doing that so I'll let it go but your next song hopefully will not have that annoying oscillator running. Some dancy drums which are good but you could at least change the drums later in the song. I like the heaven sound at 49 seconds in. Put some massive fat on it to truly make it heavenly if that made sense to you. Oh and more reverb on the sounds. Feels empty without reverb. I will grade you a 9/10 but that's because this was your first time using FL. I'll be much more critical in my next review to you. Your on the right track though so keep going. See yah.
Cheers some helpful info there ill do wat i can for the next song