well the begginning sounded cut off, the beat was really not very good and it was made out of all FL presets. in fact all the synths were all presets and were not mixed at all and sound very unmastered. the part at like 27 seconds, some notes were way louder than the others.
The entire song was extremely repitive, and kind of sounded all mushed together.
I'm not trying to be mean, just telling you the truth, so dont be mad.
If you get a chance check out some of my songs