man...
well this is not a song its loops not put together right.
the guy that left a reveiw also dont know what hes talking about.
but.. this needs alot of work.
you need to place the loops right. at the start with the bass an drums they were off a few nots an i understand what you wanted with the cut off an then the hi hat hit. but you need to make a over cut as maybe a snare hit with echo on it then the hi hat then back to the beat..
but just work on trying to place things togethere on the right time
lantzalot 
Valerytropic 
