Another preset loop...
It eas cool how you changed the volume... but that's it sorry. You only used pre-set loop(s) again... come on now! Use some originallity.
i work a lot with garageband... and i can hear the premade loops, i know them... before i made my own loops i works tons with the loops... get some orginal material and put a LOT more effort into this.
you need to flow over this!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.