oh man

this one builds nicely. The first strings to come in were so washed out with reverb, but I guess thats the feel you were going for, judging by the drum kit that follows them. The swelling pads in the background are so eerie haha.

The intro is a little lengthy though. The reverb def takes away from the melody. The synth strings were jumping around my headphones, sounded sick. But this song sort of dragged out. Not enough variation to last the 6 min without losing some interest.

Overall, a very nice mood you set in this piece, like a dark castle in the woods. Would have much rather heard the said castle be attacked at the end.

subject

im gonna disagree with piano forte here, i like the strings and how far foreward they are, although its almost classical as opposed to ambient. kinda stuck somewhere in limbo there.
I think the biggest problem is that altho the notes change, it still feels like the same thing over and over. I think it needs to be mixed up by switching instruments, or adding something like part way thru, or changing the instrument that carries the melody. I think the quiet section might do that, but idk since ya havent made/put it up yet.

again throw in a "bridge" i guess with an entirely diffrent instrument then mix them together with the current thing, then take it out, something to switch it up a bit i think would do it well.

gj tho

hmmm

First you should work on the background noise. it's overcompressed and causes this damn fuzz so you cannot really enjoy the melody at all. my second complain is that the "strings" are very loud. might be just my personal taste but I think ambient songs should be calm, relaxing and be able to creates imagines in your head. but with those strings it's just like BAM BAM BAM all the time. no time to breath between them. a more silent / muted part mixed with the stringsparts would work very well I think.
I'm looking forward to your final product....