eh...

its really is too quiet... nothing much in it... only 1 tune is playing, and the background only 1, which is not there at all the break points...

add more tunes and background nexttime

/blank/

I liked the tune, but this song needs more instruments. Or more things happening at once. The parts where only the harp was playing needed a background sound. Generally, you always want a quiet melody behind the tune and the regular background, so that there are no 'blank' spaces in the music between notes where there is no sound.