Okay... I Come In Peace!
it was nice... but it needs more tunes, becuz there is something missing in it...
and anyway, make it more effective by using diffrent tunes, this one was like using the same tune over and over... the background music needs to be there, when something is on... and when you try to add diffrent tunes, dont just stick it on the book with paper, cut out first to make it smooth out into that tune... you might not getting to know where im going though... but thats no important, its your own taste, your own music, you make it =D
Keep it up brutha!