Better than what I can do
This song is great. I suggest having the end of the song having a fade out or have another descending note (at the really end), because in this song, at the end, the music fades for a bit, then gets cut off, making our brain think that there is more to this song. It's like going up a major scale and stopping at a Major 7th but on a smaller degree.
Other than that, this is another good work of art especially if this is just a rough draft.
I heard your other ones and they're as awsome as this one. Keep going. 5/5
its actually pretty good. 10/10
That was amazingly beautiful, and very sad.
can u please send me the lyrics to this or send me a link where u have them i want to read it
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