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~Silver Memory~ -hania


Author Comments

Once upon a time is our start
On a planet hidden deep in the stars
There's a young boy waiting
Transcending parts of silver memories

Ships arrive with the army of doom
All he hears is screaming that'll end pretty soon
Now he waits for something
Hope in his heart
And silver memories...

He remembers his friends and his family
How they laughed as they played
He remembers his dreams
Then reality
As he sits and he waits

Once upon a time is the start
There's no happy ending to this final part
Can you hear the pain beating in his heart
Can you see his silver falling apart
Can you see his silver falling apart

His silver memory...

This is a song from the book I'm writing "Memory Planet". It's still in the making... I have so much other stuff going on that it keeps getting to the back of the line. Eventually it'll be completed.


Better than what I can do

This song is great. I suggest having the end of the song having a fade out or have another descending note (at the really end), because in this song, at the end, the music fades for a bit, then gets cut off, making our brain think that there is more to this song. It's like going up a major scale and stopping at a Major 7th but on a smaller degree.
Other than that, this is another good work of art especially if this is just a rough draft.


I heard your other ones and they're as awsome as this one. Keep going. 5/5

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its actually pretty good. 10/10


That was amazingly beautiful, and very sad.


can u please send me the lyrics to this or send me a link where u have them i want to read it

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Credits & Info


4.04 / 5.00

Nov 13, 2007
4:36 AM EST
File Info
1.6 MB
1 min 43 sec

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You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:

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You may not use this work for commercial purposes. *
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*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.