lejin youve done it again

im lovin it lol, ayo i forgot to tell you, if you want can you check out my song and give me some suggestions of improvement, cuz i need it since im still learning...im still young lol, but if you can check out some of my music, especially Whack MC's and House Party, they were made with me and a rap group im in, called Jersey Endless, and check out their myspace too.

http://www.myspace.com/ jerseyendless

Nice.

Sillybilly 6 months and worse rep than me? And i'm only like a month? I laugh at this toy. Keep it real Lej. You're flow needs work but you're lyrics kick ass.
Keep it real.
Xplicit.

...hmpppffffffffffff AAAAHAHAHHAHAHA

Silly muthafuckin no flow "i have astma, and i smoke so i cant breathe when i rap, and i took on the big lej tryna make my name big and i THINK am so good cuz i got rmp on me" billy, u just got k.o'd. whats the matter? why u mad billy?
real talk
peace

Provoke your fans?

The hook sounds off at points. And that's most of the track. I also find it funny on how all ya fans are just new accounts, and how they ride ya dick quick as hell. I even believe you being on Lucrazer saying how Nitemare is ya bitch. Lucrazer hasn't posted shit, and he sure as hell does type like you. Also, stop being a hypocrite. Before you was saying mad shit on how he ain't on ya level, and this ain't even a battle. Next thing you know, you putting out more tracks than he did you. You's a real shady character bruh...

Dang son

im madd how u used mi beat wit out tellin me but its over now son.....jus wait...ereybody goin see da new beginning