Ok first of you should say that this is a remix of a song cause i have this on my ipod somewhere cept i havnt been able to find it. For the remix of the song it is a lot more repetitive than the original and you should try and make it less repetitive and change around the tune a bit to make it more original and interesting to listen to. Otherwise good first attempt mate!
This tune has a very catchy beat, it just seems a bit repetitive in parts. The soundFX'z are all very good, sounds like you put a bit o work into it. I love the way it picks up at the end.... even still the song sounds more like a dance track than techno.. but maybe thats just me
ps. loops good too!