i think it misses the professionality...Even if the effects, and fades are nice.
I had used a stronger kick.. and such a more emphatic synth^^
It's simple and repetitive, but the rhythm and atmospherics are strong. If I had to make a suggestion, it would be try switching it up with another chord progression.
it could use a bit of work but it sounds promising.
The song is all the same, from the beggining to the end... you could have done more rythms.
It seemed to be a little bit too repetitive. However, besides that, it was well put together and it was nice and consistent. Keep up the good work mate.
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