It just needs to add on more tunes... this wasnt really that effective, and it was repeatitive which makes it boring, repeative hip hop are much better if they use various effective tunes... add few more stuff, and make it more effectivly... so it has a feeling into it...
Keep it up,
damn dog i thought i liked the original beat but this one is tight, ya boy needs to start selling beats cuz he'll be a rich dude yaknowhati'mtalkinbout another 5/5 and 10/10 keep it up!
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