Everything but the speed grind....
you did a good job of breaking up rhythms here, but where's the speed grind? Whats the point of playing slow if you can't pop out the16th and 32nd notes? You've got tone issues going on; it sounds like you bastardized a good live recording by letting some gay post production program get it's filthy hands on it.
i liked the beginning but after that, the distortion just became stupid, way too much.
you got a good riff you just gotta tone that down, maybe tighten it up and you got a pretty good, song. the pause between the intro and the real riff was too long, and if it does have to be that long you could add something to it, like a run a glass bottle up the fret board, i dont know i dont play guitar but it a little artificial with the dead silence.
also i usually dont respect songs with dumb names, i mean would you really put the name "Evil Doings Mwahahaha" on a CD.
either way its a good song just need some tweaking.
The beginning was my favourite.