Seems unfinished or rushed. Remember to take more time for your tracks to really make all your ideas and concepts reach their maximum potential. A song is never finished, it is merely abandoned. If given more time this really could be a musical masterpiece.

Can't say much of it. Would be a fit to a indie snes game or some runescape fanmade ost. but it feels empty and repetitive to me.
You could add up some new sounds to make it more lively and atmospherically filling. other than all this I guess it's ok. ( )

Obvious video game vibes here, nice. It does give the feel of a march. I like the overall composition. Though I am noticing some odd instances when the volume just drops out completely as if it were noise-gated or a vst or rendering glitch. At 00:47 is one of them. 01:34 is the second one. Maybe revisit the project to fix those instances. This is so retro though I love it. It's a very happy piece, puts me in a good mood. I like the different sections you composed, though come to think of it I can only identify two unique sections which seem to be repeated. Don't get me wrong, I think this fits very well for NES-style games but I don't know if that was your intention for the piece. I believe VGM like this is meant to be looped so not a big problem for me. Actually this is kind of hypnotizing. I'd definitely change the genre from experimental to video game. Final Thoughts: Fix the two sound glitches, consider varying the sections each time you introduce the main sequences (this can be done by adding another instrument layer or altering the melody a little bit each time), as far as production goes, I'd say maybe a little reverb thrown on would help the lead instrument. It's kind of minimalistic (the instrumentation) so no comments on the mix, I can hear each instrument very clearly. I'm gonna say 3.5 but with those fixes it can easily be a 4.5-5 for me.