Really You Shouldn't Drop the Track

Just try and make it better. Personally I think it's great but it needs some slight refining. The guys voice could have been... well... cooler. But god that line that your laying down at 2:24 really gets me on my feet lol. I agree that the kick sounds too muffled but at some points it sounds good.

Overall I think this has a great groove to it and it deserves to be heard. Awesome job.

good use of classic elements..

and it has a good beat. many of the sounds are nice, and smooth with just enough edge to give a punch.

personally, i would left some of the occasional voice parts out, like when the guy talks. the vocoder stuff was a keeper though.
and some of the levels are off IMO, some things are a tiny bit too loud, others are a little too soft.

the kick just sounds....too muffled..like it is in another room. and it sometimes disappears all together, when you know it is supposed to be there.

perhaps you had your sub turned up the whole way when you were listening to it, where as i (when reviewing) listen with straight, eq'ed headphones, to hear the true vision of a song.

good stuff though.