Really You Shouldn't Drop the Track
Just try and make it better. Personally I think it's great but it needs some slight refining. The guys voice could have been... well... cooler. But god that line that your laying down at 2:24 really gets me on my feet lol. I agree that the kick sounds too muffled but at some points it sounds good.
Overall I think this has a great groove to it and it deserves to be heard. Awesome job.