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A little too much variety

The beginning was well done until the instrument from the right came in. You made that the focus, and anything focused should be in the middle. Also the bass was a little too high for the percussion.

The violins, piano, and the soft sound starting the song were all done very well. I think you just need practice pacing the song (not changing the instruments so often) and not changing the focus so dramatically (going from soft strings to the loud right strings).

M3nace responds:

I really appreciate this review, though i don't agree entirely that I focused on the synth on the right (it was more of an interlude while the focus was on the tremolo strings)

I will agree that my pacing could have been better, I may re-submit this song after I spend some more time on it (This took me a half hour to make approximately).

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Nov 4, 2007
11:55 AM EST
File Info
1.8 MB
1 min 56 sec

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