Glad someone else enjoys this song as much as I do, snare is slightly high in the mix but it's a good cover.
This is the final version of Twilight, which I uploaded a demo of a couple days ago.
Thank you to Brain Stain ( @thattomshow ) for the backing vocals!
Edit: re-mastered
LYRICS:
[VERSE 1]
For the first time, you see the sign
Its like a golden moon shining in the sky
Look for your God in the dark, and oh, he's left you hollow
You run in the heat of dim and darkness
You run in the heat of tears and loners
Your God is in your heart, so he must survive so deep and so far
[CHORUS]
Twilight! Is in the sky
Twilight! Is in your mind
Twilight! You cant get out, its all around, all around
Twilight! Like a mystic moonlight
Twilight! Like the deepest ocean
Twilight! Like an empty space, and something more, something many, more...
[VERSE 2]
Gone in the road of empty pain
Conscious is lost in the black
Your souls start to bond in the night, the black stars
The sky's becoming red with mad
Your body's soul, he's there
Your faith is fighting with yourself by the way she's there
[CHORUS 2]
Twilight! Is in the sky
Twilight! Is in your mind
Twilight! You cant get out, its all around, all around
Twilight! Like a mystic moonlight
Twilight! Like the deepest ocean
Twilight! Like an empty space, and something more, something many, MORE!
[VERSE 3]
For the first time, you see the sign
Its like a golden moon shining in the sky
Look for your God in the dark, and oh, he's left you hollow
You run in the heat of dim and darkness
You run in the heat of tears and loners
Your God is in your heart, so he must survive so deep and so far
[CHORUS 3]
Twilight! Is in the sky
Twilight! Is in your mind
Twilight! You cant get out, its all around, all around
Twilight! Like a mystic moonlight
Twilight! Like the deepest ocean
Twilight! Like an empty space, and something more, something many, MORE!
Glad someone else enjoys this song as much as I do, snare is slightly high in the mix but it's a good cover.
AZURA!
Has potential, the elements are there, they just need fleshing-out and more attention to balancing of instrumentation and vocals when it comes to overall mixing. For me the vocals are too upfront, as are the drums. The guitars and synths are kinda lost. You also need to watch your recording levels. The track is clearly pushed too hard, just keep an eye on your waveforms. Better to bring everything down in volume and balance the mix first before pushing the levels too hard. I like the overall style and idea, just needs some polishing.
thank you so much! if possible, could you help me mix the track properly, for the album version?
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.