Good

I wish I knew you. Nice work.

puts me to sleep

don't get it

whatever MaestroRage

dude don't even listen to that noob he's just talking shit thats all
props dude that was a great song nothing wrong with it either 15/10

sexy vibe, great melodic work, trumpets = bad

my first concern for this song stems from the strings, and trumpets. They sound way too midi'ish. I mean the piano sounds freaking fantastic, the mood and atmosphere set is phenomenal, and the sax sounds much better here. The delay and reverb applied to the sax works out well especially when you cut the song suddenly.

As for story, I get the image of one of those detective black and white movies, where the attractive girl customer who asked his drug lord husband to be followed falls into the detective, and he's like "womans, get OFF MAI BACK >:(" but with words that are more romantic, and arrogant.

That change of mood from 3:06 and that trill you play with the strings later on, drastically changed the mood, followed by that bitter strings section, and then that semi angry remorseful piano, playing the same trill as the strings? Very well made connections here my good friend Solus. That part makes me think of a funeral, a requiem of sorts.

Again, brilliant piece, one I enjoyed a great deal, keep up the good fight man!

yarp

real nice emotive piece, the piano is awesomenessness.
i wouldn't mind having ago at playing the sax live for ya, would be great practice for me and make the track sound that little bit more blue.
message me if you want me to have a go and i'll send you my e-mail so u can send me a version without it
;ped