all right
it was ok, except the part (0:31~0:51), which was kinda out of place + random.
try messing with note velocity too
Another Piano song, maybe I'll work more on it;)
all right
it was ok, except the part (0:31~0:51), which was kinda out of place + random.
try messing with note velocity too
Hey, yeah, I just thought like this, maybe it is really a too fast part, but without it, it sounds very boring and not really variety. But it wasn't random, I just bring it extra there, just imagine the song without this part, all in all it sounds ok, but it's not interesting. It gives the song a variety ;)
{Zedd}
They can't hear it at all...
The piano says it all. I doubt you can make this much better.
Hey jnzfab, first, thank you for this review and this score =).
Well, It's really hard tp find a part, that fits to the song AND make it better, bute maybe I will make more Melodies in it, and a complete longer version ( Maybe up to 3 Minutes ;)) But the question is, if its really sounds at this length nice, well, i don't know, but I can test some sounds and melodys, and if isn't better or nicer, I will be nevertheless cleverer than before ;)
its a nice piano-esque song.
you just need to add more to bring out the true beauty of this song.
Heyho, you're right, on this moment I working on this, but the probnlem is how to give it the 'perfect' damn think^^ On the one side, it sounds to full, on the other side, it doesn't fit to the song, it's too fast, or too slow, too happy or too sad.... But I will find a nice alternative ;)
thank you for listening and review,
{Zedd}
Hmmmmm...
The song itself sounds like it could be very good, but the complete lack of dynamics make it feel lifeless and dry and ruin the overall experience.
There are other smaller issues that may just be due to my presonal preferences but the dynamics problem is something you should address in future works.
Heyho =), yeah, I just thinked a bit like that, but I wondered as I wanted to repair that, it is because of the punctation, ( don't know the word in english, Imean the notes with dots) So it sounds a bit strange, but I work on it ;)
thx for the review,
{Zedd}
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