ive always liked this one

i remember when you were making it lol

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this song sounds relatively the same the whole way throgh :( need s a climax ( a part where the song sounds the best). only comment :)

instrumentah

I like the complexity it builds into. The problem I have however is the backing track is the same exact instrument as Voices.

I would recommend always changing the instruments you use, even if you use the same instrument, make sure your always changing the properties of it to make it more yours. Turn up the tone, distort it, add effects, etc. It can dramaticly improve your song just by the sound alone, plus if people want to listen to more than just 1 song from you, they wont say "every song sounds the same".

So yea. Great job on the track, I'm definitely downloading it.

Nicely done!

the piano can sound freaking great and i think you utilized that in this! well done my friend!