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Suicide - by hania

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Uploaded
Nov 2, 2007 | 5:14 AM EDT
File Info
Song
1.9 MB
2 min 4 sec
Score
3.95 / 5.00

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You are free to copy, distribute and transmit this work under the following conditions:

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You must give credit to the artist.
Noncommercial:
You may not use this work for commercial purposes.
No Derivative Works:
You may not alter, transform, or build upon this work.

*Please contact me if you would like to use this in a commercial project. We can discuss the details.

Score:
Rated 3.95 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Pop
Tags:
vocal
piano
cute
strength

Author Comments

You are the pain in my throat
When you are near me I choke
Everything round me screaming
'Stop! Don't do it!'

You are the hurt in my heart
Every time I try to start
Everything round me screaming
'Stop! Or lose it'

I try to run but I don't
I try to hide on my own
I really do try to die but I'm scared
To ruin your life and mine
Hit two birds in one straight line
I really do try to die somewhere...

You have your hands tipped with blades
When you hold me I'm afraid
Of being cut but then I guess I'd be free

If you weren't human I'd tense
Cause then all this would make sense
I'd know what everything was telling me!

I try to win but I lose
There's no real end I can choose
To be let free without suicide
So now I'm just gonna do
What I can try to get through
It's now the start of a life long ride

You are the cramp in my side
You jab at me like a knife
Everything round me screaming
"Stop! Don't do it!"

My mind's made up with a choice
For once I'm using my voice
Everything round me praising
"Please keep with it!"

I try to win but I lose
There's no real end I can choose
To be let free without suicide
So now I'm just gonna do
What I can try to get through
It's now the start of a life long ride

I try to run but I don't
I try to hide on my own
I really do try to die but I'm scared
To ruin your life and mine
Hit two birds in one straight line
I really do try to die somewhere...

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If you're thinking about suicide, please reach out!

United States of America
National Suicide Prevention Lifeline
Call: 1-800-273-8255
Available 24 hours everyday

Australia
Lifeline Australia Crisis Support and Suicide Prevention
Call: 13 11 14
Available 24 hours everyday

Reviews


VomitchristDOOMVomitchristDOOM

Rated 5 / 5 stars

wow

You sound like a silkier, quirkier version of Evanescence. Beautiful.


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SnowyDarkSnowyDark

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Fantastic

This song is well written, musically and lyrically, and it was beautifully executed. Nice Job!


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kamakennykamakenny

Rated 5 / 5 stars

WOW!

This is just amazing. Everyone else is right though, the voice needs to be raised a bit but other than that 5/5 and 10/10!


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hania responds:

Yeah I totally agree - keep in mind this was made years ago and I've learned a lot since then ;) If I re-make this, I'll make sure I give it the mix & mastering attention it deserves!


haxoryhaxory

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

lol verrrry nice

9/10 nice song bit louder plz


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FreedomsWingsFreedomsWings

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Don't Do It!

Makes me cry. Maybe make your voice louder.


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