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Suicide - by hania

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Uploaded
Nov 2, 2007 | 5:14 AM EDT
File Info
Song
1.9 MB
2 min 4 sec
Score
3.95 / 5.00

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Score:
Rated 3.95 / 5 stars
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Genres:
Metal, Rock - Pop
Tags:
vocal
piano
cute
strength

Author Comments

You are the pain in my throat
When you are near me I choke
Everything round me screaming
'Stop! Don't do it!'

You are the hurt in my heart
Every time I try to start
Everything round me screaming
'Stop! Or lose it'

I try to run but I don't
I try to hide on my own
I really do try to die but I'm scared
To ruin your life and mine
Hit two birds in one straight line
I really do try to die somewhere...

You have your hands tipped with blades
When you hold me I'm afraid
Of being cut but then I guess I'd be free

If you weren't human I'd tense
Cause then all this would make sense
I'd know what everything was telling me!

I try to win but I lose
There's no real end I can choose
To be let free without suicide
So now I'm just gonna do
What I can try to get through
It's now the start of a life long ride

You are the cramp in my side
You jab at me like a knife
Everything round me screaming
"Stop! Don't do it!"

My mind's made up with a choice
For once I'm using my voice
Everything round me praising
"Please keep with it!"

I try to win but I lose
There's no real end I can choose
To be let free without suicide
So now I'm just gonna do
What I can try to get through
It's now the start of a life long ride

I try to run but I don't
I try to hide on my own
I really do try to die but I'm scared
To ruin your life and mine
Hit two birds in one straight line
I really do try to die somewhere...

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If you're thinking about suicide, please reach out!

United States of America
National Suicide Prevention Lifeline
Call: 1-800-273-8255
Available 24 hours everyday

Australia
Lifeline Australia Crisis Support and Suicide Prevention
Call: 13 11 14
Available 24 hours everyday

Reviews


firerzerofirerzero

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

...........

.....what are you looking? what your point on live? ........
dont give up ok folo what you belive



EvilRaccoonEvilRaccoon

Rated 4 / 5 stars

You have talent.

You have talent, but you hold back your voice for parts that you really need to strongly sing. If you don't you will get what alot of people foresee as a repetitive musician. And you dont want to be seen as a one trick pony.

You have talent, but try some versatility. Also, i would like to hear the music abit sharper. The crispness is lost somewhere.


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panzer5panzer5

Rated 3 / 5 stars

bbrrrbbbrrr

i dont know what to say =P



aksamoaaksamoa

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

;'( reminders

This reminds me of a friend of mine that committed suicide :( great song though, very beautiful voice


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azn-trickzazn-trickz

Rated 4 / 5 stars

good job

vocals needs to be louder

beautiful voice

single straight 8th beat on the drums would suit perfectly or quarter note beats

keep it up

i loved it :)


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