Lol

Yeah it's quite good. I liked the way you went off the rythm to show what a mistake the poor guy did. You should've made it a bit longer though (ultra-embarrassing :P) but apart from that, good song.
8/10
4/5

LOL...

I liked the first half of it nice guitar and last half was pretty funny with the trumpit, Lol good job!

quite funny

quite funny but you should of still kept with it.

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i wish you stayed with the beat instead of screwing it up. Very good rythem though. Since half the song was good i give you a 5/10