I lol'd at your effort.
I can tell you put some effort into this, but it is too quiet. It is WAY to slow for ANY type of flash, unless its all done in slow motion. All in all, you did a pretty good job.
To: NAMEOFUSER, and, Experiment-D:
I hardly understand what you said. "Souns" "Whene" "Hev'em" "Mre" are not words. And your lack of puncuation made me cry. Please go to Literature class before you ATTEMPT another review. I don't mean to be harsh, but, the abuse of the Typed English language is really pissing me off.