I lol'd at your effort.

I can tell you put some effort into this, but it is too quiet. It is WAY to slow for ANY type of flash, unless its all done in slow motion. All in all, you did a pretty good job.

To: NAMEOFUSER, and, Experiment-D:
I hardly understand what you said. "Souns" "Whene" "Hev'em" "Mre" are not words. And your lack of puncuation made me cry. Please go to Literature class before you ATTEMPT another review. I don't mean to be harsh, but, the abuse of the Typed English language is really pissing me off.

intresting

sounds like you have a pretty slow animation on your hands. the souns whene they end just stop. to fix this just hev 'em to seconds longer and fade it out it will bring a very professional quaality to your work. cant wait for the animation.

boring

the only good part is the end
add something mre
like more strings doing scales or something in the same key
because it just feels empty
but it sounds like a great start
just work on it some more