the melody is built quite well, the piano goes pretty great with the main lead and saw bass. Perhaps the kick is a little weak, especially in the first drop of 0: 20 - 0: 50. By the way, the bass also disappears, it should have been made a little stronger too. Because of this, the drop is slightly empty. Perhaps it would be altho worth strengthening the lead in the drop so that there would be more energy. On the whole, it's pretty good, but it could have been better. Good luck :)