this song is still in it's basics, you gotta put some meteria in it, maybe a better guitar and some more drums, a strong bass and maybe some vocals, though this is very good for a base, 2/5
an idea not taken far enough
You should experiment more with the modulating guitar. I'm quite curious what can come out of that.
For example, how about if you throw a staccating on-and-off volume envelope over that guit?
2/5 (good idea, but song's too basic at the moment)