but i woulve picked way better instruments.
i like that two part thing, too.
and about 1:50, you need to level out that chorus. its really loud.
halfway to a masterpiece
I really love the idea. Love the way the beat shuffles. Love the appregios. Love the way tunes come in and leave again to make place for another.
You want criticism? Here goes:
- Bassline doesn't sound as convincing as it could be. Maybe throw some more pronounced effects/filters over it. Imho, it sounds too cheesy-squelchy. Either that or put that more to the backgound.
- Right now, this track feels like a journey. How about expressing the destination? This could be an entirely different song if you put a bigger, orchestral drop/climax after 2:00 (or 3:00, whatever you like), introducing variations of the appregio(e)s/themes you already used. You should be able to do that, with so many different tunes. Perhaps with other samples and sounds. If you put a totally new chord scheme with strings/choirs to accompany some key tunes you already used, this could be HUGE.
5/5. Kudos. Hope you'll take this song to a higher level.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.