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AIM - Out by the shipyard

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My entry to the AIM 2021, inspired by Out by the shipyard by EchoCharlieDelta:


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This track is a little experimental for me, with some metal sounds, a bit of soundscape and no piano. It has 5 sections:


0:00 Introscape

1:23 A Shipyard Walk

2:32 Empty Shells (Main Theme Part 1)

3:32 Tales of Grandeur (Main Theme Part 2)

4:33 Outroscape

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What I wholly love about this piece is how it takes its time setting the scene. I feel like I'm listening to the whole picture, not only the details, but also the atmosphere and the emotion. This is mainly due to the sections, which I could hear being expanded into their own tracks like a mini EP of sorts.

In the first section, the more ambient sounds integrate with the acoustic sounds seamlessly. I enjoyed the gradual buildup with the additions of more sounds subtly entering until the very end where the tension in that buildup finally becomes apparent. The chord choices in the second section are beautifully spaced out and the silence between the chords allows for one to linger on the emotional impact, but it is interesting that the silence between these chords seems to get shorter as that section progresses.

One minor nitpick I have is with the transition between the "Shipyard Walk" and "Empty Shells" sections. The strings not fading to silence was a good choice in preventing the piece from sounding like two different tracks, but they slightly duck between 2:31 and 2:32 in a place that would have felt more natural remaining at that same volume when the new string section enters.

I love how the third section flows, and all those strings working together in harmony just work so well in capturing the emptiness and sadness of a landscape. When the harp comes in at the fourth section, it really gives me KOLM vibes - just that right balance of hope and melancholy. The final section, bringing things back to a more ambient sense, quieting down...just brilliant.

Overall, I love how the piece takes its time with setting the mood with its strings, laying out the parts in a beautiful, flowing manner. I think there’s a beauty among the empty, desolate sadness, kind of like empty structures that get taken over with passing time. It makes me think: is nature trying to win its way back?

nyxl responds:

Thanks for listening and for your detailed review! I'm happy because what you described on how you experience the track is what I was aiming for. You are right about the strings around 2:31, I think this is because the highest note changes from root to seventh and the transition between the two notes does not really exist. It didn't bother me anymore after a lot of listens, but as you noticed, I should have tried to improve that :)

this is so beautiful, I love it!!!!!
You did an excellent job of mixing all the sounds and textures to make beautiful melodies
Great job!!

damn man, this is incredible

Credits & Info

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Downloads
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Votes
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Score
4.71 / 5.00

Uploaded
May 28, 2021
6:35 AM EDT
Genre
Cinematic
File Info
Song
12.1 MB
5 min 19 sec
Software
  • Cubase Pro

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.