nice start!!!! :D

this seems a tad more hip-hop to me....but the driving synth in the beginning is nice. wasn't a fan of the beat....the drum actually has a pitch to it, which seems to conflict with the songs key, as well as the kick-it's a tad high, needs to be pitched down....i thought 1:29-end was cool! it was cool once it all layered!!! i think its way danceable if you work on the few pitch things..i think it will meld well. great first submission! <3 Kerrie