i'm gonna say it like i see it
to me this song should not have been over 2 minutes. i wasn't even interested until around the 4 minute mark where it became cool for a bit. the worst thing for me was the same chord progression over and over with little change. It didn't get my head banging and it didn't make me visualize any type of "atmosphere". both killers for any hope of re-playability.
in my experience it is better to have a song a little short and have people want to replay it then to make an epic that people get tired of before it's over.
if you chopped this up and just used the faster parts with the drums and techno synths it would be pretty cool.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.