I'll give you two advantages this song has over Chronamut's rendition.
- Is not used so much
- Words are understandable
I'm a little ashamed to admit, but this has become one of my favorite songs! I might just use it again.
unoriginal yet sweet
i like the sound of it, but, ahm... don't think NG is the place to put songs with copyrighted loops. You should remove it before a moderator gets mad at you.
Well then, on to the criticism. Piano appregio is a bit too loud and has a bit too much reverb/delay. Great composition with all the channels blending in a sweet little song. I give you a lower score because this didn't come completely from your own mind. 3/5
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.