i liked it but the scream knda sounds like a dog howl
Ok lol don't think i'm a hater man but i'm gonna tell you some things you should improve on this song.. The song concept is great.
First off you should change the opening.. its to slow and really doesn't have any feel to it.. Just sort of to us listeners seems like (Yah its leading up to something...ok...ok..thats it?) Give it a better lead up.. The guitar concept was a great idea just go with that and add some more sounds.. the screaming comes in rather well. Add more of that here and there. try different types of screams.. Howling? stuff like that..
its not a bad track just needs improvement
I think it didn't get started and up and going fast enough. It might just be me, but I like techno/rave/industrial songs that keep up the pace. Also, there wasn't that much to it. It may be good to throw a little bass into it, get some more feeling you know? It was put together very well though, and it doesn't lack in quality at all. Good work, but needs a lil improvement.
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