Having said that, there is something that really got me about this though. Did you use compression? Somethings wrong with this. I'm not sure if it's compression or what but the song just seems really uneasy and dry. But I'm sensitive to stuff like that so whatever.
A possible reason for this may be a compression over the entire song with an overpowering bass. Try to compress just the bass first using a low threshold, then compress the entire track.
But hey its still a great song so I give you a 9.
it seems kinda low volumed. i liked the sequences you had in it. my opinion is you turn the kick drums a little higher volumed. because i can tell that you know what your doing with them, it might be smart to turn them bitches up! good job
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