Nioce slow beat.

Kind of NIN type thing The lyrics are a little blurred, but when you close your eyes you can go somewhere as long as your ready for the ride...i like your work here bud.

Hmmmm

i like how it is a slow beat, but i think it would have been cooler if it speeded up or had a power boost somewhere in the piece. Also, in my opinion, i think the piece would be better if the voice wasnt in there. maybe what you were trying to personify is something better than what i hear. good work, and good luck! :)