All the things you did well in the other songs (I'm going recent release to older) is here. But in this one the drums I mentioned before being a tad too loud are far too loud here. It takes away from your mix and song which is a crying shame because what you've got here is great! (Not that my mixes are velvety smooth either) my suggestion would be to bus and compress (season with some reverb) your drum track (all your tracks) and just drop the volume a bit. Would bring out all the instruments nicely!

Basically if Ecludian had a less annoying melody. It still suffers from similar problems but overall a huge improvement. 7.5/11