heh masticate means chew

thats funny every meal i burst into mastication :P

Eh, not too bad

Yeah it's not good but I can sympathize I used to do shit like this when I first started. FL Studio has some neat tools but it still ends up sounding like bad techno. You've got a great ear for harmony. Focus on what you can do with the guitar harmonizing with your self and then translate it to the midi instruments. Also remember that with drums it's best to go minimalist and use the cool complicated shit with the transitions.

Look around you can find some trials of good recording software like sonar or logic. With what you're doing here look up ableton live it has a really neat session view where you can even do some loop stuff but you need a midi foot pedal.

Keep going man you've got some good ideas but room for improvement.

Not to bad.

Its not great but its pretty good. You should add some lyrics.. Hell you could add in the author comments for lyrics haha would work perfectly!