I could Rap to This 5/5 - 10/10
Really, really nice beats 'n stuff..
But where the heck are the rhymes?
you should put some real rap in there..
AY FOR A FIRST COLLAB IT AINT BAD HOMIE I LIKE IT THIS NEW ONE COMIN UP GON BE RAW THO IM WORKIN ON IT RITE NOW BRUH
Ok, there are a few reasons why I gave you a 3/5 rather than some good respect. Respect, I think, should be earned, and this song wasn't enough. You did good, but I feel it could have been better. All those bells and whistles and sound effects are cool, but the sound still just sounded bare. The main tune almost drowned out everything else, including the beat, which I guess was alright, but it was redirecting my attention the entire time. I liked the evil laugh you put in before the rev-up part. The snare in the beat was good, but the kick just didn't kick hard enough. It sounds like someone is pounding on the wall, rather than kicking in a drum. The "Hey!" sound effect was a good touch, still. It's good, don't get me wrong, but definitely could be better. This isn't the 'hottest track' as you say it is, in my opinion, but it certainly is getting there. Take care.