I like this song... but for some reason I can't help but feel like this track has quite a few rough edges that needs to be sorted out.

First is something like chord progression... though I haven't taken music theory so I can't tell you exactly what's wrong with it... I just feel like there's something wrong with the progression.

Second is how muddy the track sounds. Perhaps it's because you used a "lo-fi" piano, but other times there's this strange sound that muddies up the listening experience.

Other than that, good work, keep it up!