Tips

I like it, but I think the intro needs to be less sudden. It's all smooth and the piano's flowing, then 4 fast kicks come in you've got a fast amen. I think the intro should either be a kick build or you should have the amen fade in. Speaking of amen, in my opinion, you should take the filter off. And if it's not filtering I'm hearing, then you need a higher quality amen sample. Get a VEXST one or breakbeat paradise one. And i'm also pretty sure I hear some sort of sub-bass come in at 0:21. now, i know subs are supposed to be low, but i can hardly hear it. make it louder or make a different bass.

just some constructive criticism. :D

~boney_man
can't wait to hear the finished thing.